Very well done. Your game sort of remind me of our game so I checked it out. Frankly, the story made me laugh, good job! Visuals and cutscenes are nice.
Now for the negative stuff:
Gameplay is a bit sluggish, controls are not so responsive. Audio is not on the same volume all across the board (credits music is too loud for an example.).
With a bit more time and polish this could be a great game. The game is certanly unique.