I really like art!
Trying to make a narrative game on a game jam is quite a challenge!
I’m not a writer so I can’t give you good comments on the narrative aspect, sorry
but in Polish terms:
- Lightning is great, I like the dark and white atmosphere
- Sometimes it’s hard to know where we should go
- The Ui is difficult to read espacilly when it is white on white
- Comments should be added when aligning to UI elements
Well in general it’s a good game to keep doing things like that!