Hi! I just started reading this IF after having it in my library for an eternity, and I love it so far! I really enjoy the cryptic loredropping and the way you approach things from a child's perspective. However, I did notice a few spelling errors and such, and (I really hope this doesn't offend you and I'm sorry if it does) if you don't have a beta reader or someone of the sort, I'd be happy to help you out :)
Hello ! Glad you like the game.
You don't offend me. English not being my first language it was a certainty that there would be mistakes. I don't take beta players anymore since one of the ones I took turned out to be a pirate who made my work public before I was ready, unfortunately.
Maybe when I'm calmer about it again, but help is always appreciated. 💙