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The concept was really cool. It reminded me a lot of Papers Please, and a mix of banking elements to it. Here are things that I loved, and would love to see it improved:

• The essence of this game revolves around a strong concept. It is unique and something that is interesting. I would love to see more of the story, of WHY things are the certain way. The game is really niche, and has its ups and downs.
• The biggest issue for me was that the game lacks a solid tutorial. For someone who doesn't know anything about basic banking, it was really difficult to follow. Of course, I know the basic terms, but there were times in the game, when i didn't know what to do. Would love for it to have a proper staged tutorial.
• The visuals were pretty clean, and arguably, one of the best things about the game. I loved the shooting elements as I found that relatable.
• The audio has its moments, but some audio cues were a bit off. Would love a better audio for the bgm, and shooting. Or an alternative would be to have an audio setting where we could dial it down, if it is affecting gameplay. (For me, the bgm was too loud)
• The elements inside the house where really simple to understand, and had a directness to it. Again, the biggest feedback I could give you is to have a proper tutorial. For how to deal with each element (Loan, Withdraw, Gun etc.)
• Also, I don't know if it was intentional, or just a bug. Some text weren't readable, and text was wrapping out of the text box. 

The idea has promise, and would love to see it more flushed out into a solid game. For a gamejam, you should be proud of what you've made so far as it is no easy feat. All the best! 😊