I liked the general vibe and the thrill of being chased by those thingies!! There is room for improvement, for example some graphics polish (and you can get to the final room if you jump from the starting platform to the right direction!!), but don't get me wrong: you are definitely going the right direction! Keep on improving!! Nice entry!
Here is our game, please consider rating it too ;)
https://cyberlab-studios.itch.io/packed-out