I've just tried the demo, and I approve! This seems like it's going to be a very interesting story. The protagonist Atma seems like a good guy, Nirmala is endearing, and Raya, well, we don't know too much about her yet as of this prologue.
I've just wishlisted this game on my Steam account, so I look forward to its release!
You said you were looking for feedback since you're still figuring out the full game's experience.
The only real feedback I can think of off the top of my head is that sometimes I didn't know whether I was supposed to move to a new place by clicking the "door icon" or whether I was supposed to do so by going to the edge of the screen.
Maybe you could add door icons to the edges of screens where that will work, to differentiate from "edges of screens that don't take you to new places?"
But other than that, I look forward to this game's full release!