I really like the general idea of the story, the concept and almost everything about it. The visuals and the overall atmosphere of the game are really really great! :)
What I don't like is that the game just seems to reveal more actions only if I am doing wrong things and get caught - or am I missing something here? This way it feels like I am not the one who is playing but the game is the one who is in charge.
Amazing submission! :)