The action scene during the ritual was so well done! And it looks like the story is picking up speed, I couldn’t put it down :)
Here are a few typos I found in this update:
Emily:
I haven’t lead a squad before -> led
Incendris:
the one who has lead them for thousands upon thousands of years -> led
MC:
I remember it singing my eyebrows -> singeing
Il’thera:
it gives off an aura reminscent -> reminiscent
MC to Emily:
I think you could’ve made even without us -> made it
SAndrA:
miniscule, but not non-existent -> minuscule