The game mechanic is very interesting! The audiovisuals are great for a jam game, and the storytelling is interesting.
It took me a long while to get the black hole working in the opening, and I made some progress, but couldn't remove the words "appealing" or "pine".
I like the black hole effect and how it distorts the area around it, but it's very buggy and even when it works, it takes way too long for it to suck the words.
Some more sound effects would be nice, and I wish the narrator made a comment when I went to the left in the beginning.
Everything else seems top-notch from what little I could play.