The chords are cool very medieval sounding progression, the harpsichord sounding instrument definitely adds to this. But the instrument for the main melody is definitely a little jarring.
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Yeah my main signature identity trends toward creativity rather than adherence so almost always there is at least -one- wrongheaded item in the mix :)
some things escape though, like 5% of my things hit it out of the park. Which I tend to be willing to accept that risk for the gains
Glad you gave it a try!