So before I say anything else I would like to just say that this isn't your typical game that's on sites like this especially considering it's actually more of a Visual Novel then a game as there isn't any real "gameplay" to speak of, maybe that will change down the road but as of right now? You're just sitting back and watching a story you got very little control over.
The writing itself is honestly pretty decent as it has to deal with the clitche crap that Date a Live already has and how fast the characters "develop" and relationships change so having to take that into affect with your own story letting it be corny and weird yet the Player character's story and character being more well rounded and written does make it blend a lot easier that you Arent of that world and don't belong.
I enjoy this quiet a lot and I do look forward to how this all continues