This feels... introspective. Almost cathartic. The notes on escaping reality through fiction hit very close to home. And while it's not complete yet, I would definitely be interested in seeing where this story (and those emotions) develop.
The only bit of feedback I might offer is that the jumps between scenes are rather drastic. For the first few, I was initially unsure whether we'd gone through a time jump, or even switched perspectives entirely. Maybe a quick transition at the end of each scene that leads the mind to the next could help?