I LOVE THIS SO MUCH I JUST STARTED AAAAA (also, on one scene (the first walk to the park), Milo's eyes are described are green, I'm pretty sure they aren't green, but maybe i'm just tweaking lol)
Another thing to point out when we're about to leave the barista to go to the park with Milo, it says "he puts his hands in his hoodie pocket" even though he's a cardigan, lol?! It's just a small inconsistency that bugged me. Though hoodie or cardigan, it doesn't matter what Milo is wearing, I want him >;)