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Really great looking so far, I'm excited to see what future versions look like! Mechanics seem solid, combat is well thought out and easy to learn, and visually it looks great.

My biggest concern is the writing; it's pretty wordy and throws a lot of fantasy exposition at you right off the bat. I worry that the story will suffer if it's not told in a more fluid way.

But it's definitely going into my steam wishlist and I will be following this development! 

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Hey, thank you so much for the feedback. We're glad you like the game, or most of it :D 

Regarding the writing, it was somewhat unavoidable since it's a demo meant to get people into the story ... a new world, new character, state of the world, and all that in an hour or so of content. 

For the full game, the plan is to thin the "wall of text" and go for a learn by playing style, but it was rather little space for that here.

Anyway, thank you so much for the feedback, it's super useful for us. If you like the project and want to see how it goes forward, we'd be happy to have you on Discord - the more feedback, the better for the end product.

Cheers