Thank you so much!! I'm real proud of those lines.
Almost made ExecutionHERS a whole poem but didn't because of time/energy constraints. I'm hoping to later, tho.
I really love the bolt-gun line, probably one of my favorites in the whole book. I wanted to try my hand at a horror-take on Naomi Wallace's play "Slaughter City". Can't recommend her work enough. "Trestle At Popelick Creek", "One Flea Spare", etcetc are all fantastic and frightening and beautiful