Hello mshen19!
Thank you so much for giving our demo a try and for your compliments! We are very glad to have your feedback as well since it helps to improve our game for the better!
Personally as the writer I'm happy that you like the plot! And your guess on it hmm~ I can't spoil it but you are on the right direction of thinking haha~ >w< Thank you for reminding us about proofreading as well; honestly details just keep escape my eyes when I wrote the script and transfered it to ren'py, and we unfortunately don't have a lot of credible proofreaders. This is definitely a point that we will improve on in the final version.
On your question, we are planning to release the final version during June, but it really depends on how fast I can write the script and how fast our artists can draw (coz real life stuffs haha OTL). We will, however try our best to abide to that deadline, and will try to have updates on the final version as often as possible. And yes, it will be a commercial title, although we are a little hesitant on the price right now (we have one in our head but not sure whether it's reasonable or not). If possible, could you share your opinion with us on what price you are willing to pay for the game? It would help us a lot!
Thank you very much for reading. I hope you will continue to support us in the future!
---- Narcisse19 -----