The writing was fairly interesting at first, but does get a bit weird later on. I felt the pacing was a bit slow with all the "..." pauses in the dialogue along with the slow movement speed.
I thought a lot of the cutscenes were quite well put together with good use of the animation effects. Playing music with the RTP sound effects were surprising! (Especially the end credits playing along with the BGM)
Overall, quite a good presentation for a first project ever!