Nice beautiful game. Those story based and nice guitar in the background are really good combination.
Really want to read all the story, but maybe it's a good idea to put 1-2 sentence on each page instead of a paragraph, not every person like to read many paragraph on a page.
It is also nice if you incorporate the story with the game mechanic too, for example with A you might want to give bluish color, and B with redish color, everytime you interact with A in story the blu is more vivid or something. Something like that
Love to play another game like this.. Good work!