Art and music: Beautiful and fitting
Story/setting: OK
Characters: Cute
Writing: Could be better... or I expected better judging by the quality of art. Half of it doesn't even make sense to me.
Technical stuff: The numerous, long and unstoppable transitions are the worst thing about this game. (And it's such a shame that something that easy to fix can make people drop out entirely!) I also wish I could make the text speed instant and toggle full screen.