I think Miari is the one to listen to here, especially when it comes to the camera. Being able to look around could help. Also, a break screen in between falling in the water and starting over would help to let the player know they did something wrong, otherwise it just resets without much feedback. Being able to create this much in a small amount of time it pretty awesome, though. I only fairly recently did my first game jam and trying to learn while also doing sound and art was a bit much, haha! Keep going!