Hey, I absolutely love how this is going! The art is great and the story is so interesting, can't wait to see more! But, there is one problemo.... the image below is what happened after Llith says to ask him questions and stuff after we stand up to him. Besides this, the game is really good, and I can't wait to see what happens next!
No problem, dude! Do you mind if I could possibly help you proofread? You don't have to send me anything, I could just go through the game as you put it out and tell you the grammar mistakes and such. I like doing stuff like that, so... yeah! If not, that is perfectly fine, just keep on doing you, because you're doing amazing right now, keep doing what you're doing!