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Hey, I absolutely love how this is going! The art is great and the story is so interesting, can't wait to see more! But, there is one problemo.... the image below is what happened after Llith says to ask him questions and stuff after we stand up to him. Besides this, the game is really good, and I can't wait to see what happens next!

Edit: O wait, just found out the problem, I needed to make a new game. Alright, we're good now! Love the game btw! I personally think the grammar could definitely do better, but besides that, it's awesome!

Thank you for your kind words! I'm definitely going to find someone for proofreading and staff, and overall editing to improve game.

No problem, dude! Do you mind if I could possibly help you proofread? You don't have to send me anything, I could just go through the game as you put it out and tell you the grammar mistakes and such. I like doing stuff like that, so... yeah! If not, that is perfectly fine, just keep on doing you, because you're doing amazing right now, keep doing what you're doing!

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You are welcome! If you are willing, here's my discord tag(Wormwood  #2220), or is there any other way preferable to you?

I have a discord, but I don't usually use, but I can definitely use it if it's more convenient for you! Thank you so much, my tag is (Auntie Dorito #8789). I guess I'll see you there!