Very pretty visual novel that felt like it has potential.
Summary:
Adherence To Theme
- You pack your bags to leave "the pack". Excellent idea!
Game Design
- It's somewhat of a visual Novel / Adventure mix, I like it.
- The dialogue felt meaningful and expressive although in this Demo somewhat inconsequential.
- I found the items to not have much of an effect, I could trade an Item with Erika but that's it, I hope I'm not missing something here.
Originality
- Original Story and characters (as far as I know), all one can ask for.
Style
- The graphics of the characters where very well drawn and you had a concise presence of a visual style in it throughout the gang.
- The UI and Textboxes where not over stylized but also not understated, they fit very well with the aesthetics of the game.
- The music was bit obnoxious after the 5th loop and I feel for a novel type feel, a bit more atmospheric would help a lot. Or scrap the music entirely in favor of some sound effects, if time was a problem (Which I'm sure it was, at least for me, art was a huge time consumer...)