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I really liked this game. Enjoyed the atmosphere and the story that slowly took place. Suggestion: you don't need to explain everything. You don't need to two bits of text that explain the time slips or anything like that, it takes away from the narrative and pulls the curtain back where it shouldn't. (That is, show don't tell.) I appreciate that you don't use cheap jumpscares and that you slowly show who is who in this game.

Thank you! Yeah I thought about removing those texts, maybe I'll make them shorter and more suggestive.