Hey, thanks for the submission. With the big caveat that I haven’t actually played the game, just read it, here’s my review.
Theme
I thought you hit the theme very well. I like how the cards ensure there is overlap between the city and the paracosm, but they remain distinct. It reminded me of this recent story I read in Wired.
Maps
The maps don't play a super central role in terms of mechanics, more narrative. They exist more as a record of play than the space of play, I thought. That was a theme I have identified from the jam - games treat the map as central to mechanics to different degrees. But the map itself is amazing! I love how evocative the art is for the city map.
Tone and style
I thought the layout and art were very good - probably the most polished among games I read for the jam. The guidebook is well-written and conveys a strong sense that the game knows what it is about. I like that it is written to be read aloud. However, the character deck has some spelling mistakes and could use a copy-edit. Overall I think the tone creates a very cute and cozy game.
Elegant
I love how simple the mechanics are - basically just following some instructions, pulling a card, choosing a card, and narrating. That is great. I also think the prompts on the cards are evocative enough that the game would flow well in play.
Easy to understand
I found the rules and guide easy to follow. I like that a guide is included for the Facilitator.
Overall, I really liked it! This was one of my favorite games I read for the jam. I would definitely like to play it.