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Hey, thanks for the submission. With the big caveat that I haven’t actually played the game, just read it, here’s my review. 

Theme / Maps

I didn't know you could find floor-plans on The Landmark Trust! That's a great source of maps, and a great way to kick off a game. I also like that you chose to have the players contribute to and play both sides in the conflict. That's a great way to hit the theme. Maps are pretty central to the mechanics. I liked the mechanic of the fae sigil.

Tone and style

I like the simple and fun, family-friendly vibe here. The layout is basic but serviceable.

Elegant

I feel that I can understand the mechanics, but I would have to play to figure out the strategy. I like the way it balances playing both sides. The end game in particular sounds fun.

Easy to understand

I had to reread a few points, but overall it was clear.


Thanks for the opportunity to review your game.

(+2)

Hi! thanks for the comment - I am totally stealing this structure for the feedback I do here. You're right about the design being basic, I didn't get time to do more than choose a font! I do plan to come back to it though, for clarity and looks.