I've been playing this a bit here and there and really like it, and aside from a few typos every so often, there are other bits that stand out and in my opinion should get edited. Like when Naja gets face to face with Valaar, it was just said she stands about 8 1/2 feet while he stands barely over 6, but when they're face to face she looks at him eye level in the art (although being already finished artwork that may be a harder edit if done). A little later with Zutta and Mowrn, "He flung the empty bottle into the bonfire" (between Mowrn's dialogues so the "he" should refer to him), but moments later "He finished off the drink before slamming it into the bonfire" (again between Mowrn's dialogues so it should be him). Mowrn finished his drink and threw it into the bonfire twice.