The art is amazing, very well done, congratulations.
Overall it's a very polished entry, I really liked what you did to the narrative and the flow of the game, it was a very nice and subtle touch to have these narrative moments in between levels. The theme wasn't very explicity in the entry, but I do understand how things can end up changing directions as the project demands it to xD A think that could help a lot regarding the player experiene is to allow keyboard shortcuts, having to click through the whole interface having time as a limit ends up creating a bit of friction in the experience.
Congrats mate, it's quite a good game :)