I feel like you're not giving yourself enough credit. I am quite the fan of the tried and true yuri formula, and this was a great example of one. While you are correct it is a bit typical, the writing was what I expect out of any good Yuri mangaka and the art was quite competent. I'd frankly love to see you try something like this again. Great job.
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Thank you so much for your kind and encouraging words!! We're absolutely speechless from your comment and can't thank you enough! We're super super glad you enjoyed it! Also, we are indeed working on another one for https://itch.io/jam/sugar-sweets-jam ; u ;