Not a bad start! Not bad at all. Ignoring translation errors the story is pretty sound. I want to see where this goes. So, please keep writing. Cheers!
First of all, thank you for playing it! :3 Now, I know I made many mistakes with the translation, but hey, you can't expect much from someone who can barely speak their own language well xD
Jokes aside, sure, I'll do my best to keep writing the story ^w^
the translation errors were actually not too bad easy to understand, and for the parts where it was just spanish, even if you didnt know any spanish you could probably figure it out. Cheers, looking forward to the next installment!
