I'm really digging this game so far, but it is rife with spelling and grammar errors. You should probably hire a copyeditor. Hell, I would do it for free. Good game, but man do the mistakes stand out.
I agree, I want to go back and fix or edit some of the older scenes, altho the problem is that there are too many, if you tell me which ones are the worst offenders (share screenshots? or specificaly which one so I can find it) I can start working with those
