It's by far one of the most original entry in the jam, that's for sure. I think that the main things that would have tied it together could have been some crazy sounds effects and some other over the top visual effects. I loved the "live TV" overlay, but since it was in pixel art it was a bit too different from the rest of game.
If you can improve on the techincal side, the strange-ironic part is already in its right place. Good job!