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This game was quite good! Not bad for a first impression. I really love the storytelling and the characters (especially Archie since he's my favourite). Overall I think this game has great potential. The version I have of the game might be a bit old because I downloaded it a while ago and didn't get around to playing it until now. But here are some things I noticed on my old version and some small suggestions.

- During the train section I let the timer run out to see what would happen, but nothing ended up happening. I think it would be cool if you got a bad ending if the timer ran out or it affected the story somehow. Also I was able to walk through the walls of the first carriage but I think someone else pointed that out to you anyway.

- This is a bit of a nitpick, but when I revisited the train station after that event the guards didn't have any dialogue. I'm not sure whether or not this was intentional since it's just a demo, but I thought I would bring it up just in case. 

These are just suggestions I thought might make the game even better. Of course it's your choice whether or not to take them into consideration.

- There is a yanfly plugin that adds a guest journal. I think this would come in handy to keep on track with quests and whatnot and to prevent players from becoming stuck and frustrated.

- There's also a very handy plugin by yanfly that adds a backlog. I'm pretty sure it works with the message core plugin, but it allows the player to read through previous dialogue with the press of a button. I know I personally really love having this feature available to me because I tend to get confused during plot heavy games and simply having that feature makes it so much easier for me to understand story and whatnot. Once again, this is simply a suggestion. Do whatever you want with it.


I'm really liking how this game is looking though and I'm thrilled that you're still working on it! I'm looking forward to its final release.

Thanks for playing my demo! Sadly yes the demo that is currently available is pretty outdated :I. I do make fixes to what people have pointed out but I didn't have enough sense to keep a separate demo version and full version. By that I mean when I decided to continue working on this, I just continued where I left off in the demo. So that means I can't provide an updated demo. Sorry about that :(

Yikes the countdown in the train is definitely one I haven't heard of yet. Also with the guards not having dialogue at the train station Good finds!

The Yanfly guest journal is something I definitely plan on putting in. I didn't know about this plugin that adds a backlog. You make a good point on how beneficial it would be to have. I'll look into it. Thanks for the suggestions!

I'm really glad you like my game. I know I say that a lot in comments but I really mean it every time I say it. Seeing people like my game actually makes me feel good about all the time and effort I have been putting into. It motivates me more and more to finish the game. It also pushes me to see how I can improve the game in any way to make the full version better.

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That’s fine, I’m not too stressed or annoyed about that.

I’m glad my points proved to be somewhat useful for you though and that you appreciate my comment ❤️ I know I’ve started making an rpg maker game myself and I’m sure people’s love for it is always very encouraging.