Oho I love these types of games.
Reading through the summary I could predict how the story would end, but to see how it would play out still shocked me! The secret ending got a chuckle out of me and was really satisfying. One tidbit near the end actually threw me off! I'm curious to know if there was a way to open the locked dresser in the guest room?
You did a great job of creating a really unsettling atmosphere and narrator. Loved the tileset as well! I'm looking forward to your next projects if you plan to make more games ^^.