Great game! I liked it, and disliked a few things.
What did I like?
- Game idea.
- The background music.
- The mechanic of the game.
What I disliked?
- Some of the tutorials.
- Background music is too high.
- The top design.
Some suggestion:
- Make the tutorial clear. Don't just write to move with WASD. The correct one: Move with A/ D or Move right with A move left with D.
- There is nothing that tells me how to jump. So I need to found it by myself.
- Show the player how to jump. Write Jump with W.
- Decrease the volume of the background music.
- Add a main menu.
- Add one more cloud.
-Remove or edit this one. (The top design)
I hope you found this helpful! Keep going and never give up.