Thank you so much for your comment and question!
On the saves – this is something I'm in the process of working on. The Twine/Harlowe save mechanisms are...abysmal at best. The cache saving style of saves is definitely not my ideal setup. I'm considering a few workarounds for this that probably won't be implemented as soon as Chapter 3, but I'm hoping will be implemented by Chapter 4. This has been on my list for some time, but this comment is helpful in prioritizing next steps for improving the saves!
I'm so thrilled you like the story so far, and thank you again for playing!!