Nah, it was really well put and really helpful, and right now, constructive criticism is incredibly welcome. owob
As for the fast forward thing, at the bottom right of the screen, there is like a little cog icon for the options.
If you click on it, you get a few options, where you can save the game, or load one, but also 'skip'. Though it basically fast forwards you through the events of the game up to the next option, unless you click.
And also, Tyranobuilder is way easier than Ren'py, especially considering I was a beginner. I super recommend it to you should you ever want to try your hand again XD