Thank you for this very in-depth review! I really appreciate you taking the time to write it and document everything.
I have plans to re-do the writing and interiors soon, to clean up the mistakes and clear up some of the mechanics. Thanks for the list for small changes so I can make sure I don't miss anything!
Also: Did you take a look at the Tome of Knowledge? It has some stories to help guide a new GM and cut down on some prep, but I also plan to expand those for new GMs even more in the update!
Once again: thank you!!
Okay, I've read through Tome.
It's really good, and fills in a lot of lore. The thing I was sort of hoping it would do would be to provide a list of locations in the village / events and event progressions that can happen at those locations, but I also recognize this would take up a bunch of pages.
Minor Issues:
-Page 8, 1st para, "that leads to them to leave a note" leaving a note