I thought this was cool, though it did jump a bit back and forth between relaxing and "Oh crap, I'm gonna hit this thing" or miss a flower. The text was a little hard to read, especially when the sentences got longer. White text on light blue background with white wispy wind can be hard to catch.
Unrelated, but I totally thought the L's were W's and I was shook when the first words in the level I thought read "Hewwo".