I personally don't like how busy the visuals are. Yeah I know it's "out of control", but it wasn't comforting to look at. The ending dialogue was enduldginly long, vague and consists of very little cause and effect. Again, I know I am "out of control", but it was unengaging. The first slide puzzle levels were interesting, but then the second one was way to precise with the slipery movement and insta death traps. No checkpoints ment I had to repeat the boring 10 seconds it took to get to the chellenges, and it was six times the same challange. It is impressive you made this all in two days, but I do think it was quite bloated.