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Unfortunately, a major technical issue prevents me from playing your game properly. The game runs, but UI elements appear to be scaled and overlapping each other incorrectly, such that the game's text can not be read properly. 

Other than that, my 1 feedback to you is to avoid putting in lengthy amounts of text in your 'How to Play'. Keep your instructions as simple and to the point as possible, otherwise people will not read them. You should make your game progress in a way that naturally teaches the player how to play the game. It doesn't matter if it's a game made in 3 years, or 48 hours, if your game is not intuitive to play, people won't play it! 

I do  like some of the character art in the game. Other visual elements unfortunately don't hold up and look very placeholder