I've seen you address this elsewhere in the comments, but I would really love more direction as a player in this fantastic world you've made -- I didn't even know I could find items to help me stay awake! You could even have certain "enemies" that rob you of wakefulness, sort of like the Sand Pest in Pathologic.
Overall, you've made some beautiful bones for a dreamy game. I'd love to revisit it once you've had a chance to really make the mechanics shine!