Fascinating concept. The main thing I would want changed is the length of it. It feels like there's such a limited amount of time for any sort of changes to occur that I can't possibly make all of them happen.
It is interesting how unsettling the world can get as you progress. I can't tell what some of the things are, but they still weird me out some.
I'd encourage you to concider adding a few more articles and world effects-- maybe traces of riots (smoke/flame/general destruction) or something. All in all, it's a well done premise with a lot of room for expansion. Well done.