I have some constructive criticism for you.
One: When you record your voice with Audacity (assuming that you used Audacity) don't forget to edit out the mouse click at the end. The voice work makes me cringe too.
Two: What is the orange jello and why does it kill me when I step on it?
I'm going to end on a high note. The platforming is very responsive and it is much better than some of the other games I have played and it wasn't that frustrating, that is something to be proud of.