Good stuff - more of a visual novel than branching paths game,, but I like the interactive links of the brakes and wheels, there's some great potential there.
My submission's also made with twine if you fancied giving it a go in return?
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Thanks for playing! It's definitely more linear than Twine games typically are. I'm thinking maybe after the jam I'll do another pass on the premise and make it a little more open.
I'd be happy to take a look at some point! Honestly, I wasn't expecting a ton of Twine games to be submitted due to the slight emphasis on game design/mechanics. Though I know that one Twine game was reviewed and highlighted on Mark's stream the other day.