Your pixel art, characters and music all work really well and are really nice, it's a shame things broke at the last moment - I can't wait to check this out once it is fixed though. Is this a part of a greater story for these characters? They seem like pretty cool and interesting people.
Whilst I'm on the subject, I can massively appreciate a game that has a well coded dialogue system in it. What works in this game really works so I'm excited to experience the game in how it was intended.