This gave me...a weird feeling
When I was younger, like 12-13y.o. I had this creepy stalker following me around, saying my name in this creepy horrible gross voice, I swear It was one of the most terrifying things that happened to me.
Reading the notes about that guy that said "hey stalking is cool!!!!" was like, super fucking horrible. I just...wondered, did Lola actually killed herself because of those thoughts that the showed in the game? or did the stalker made her kill herself out of fear? I just can't actually believe that Lola killed herself just...because??? they never actually said why she killed herself so Imma stuck with that theory.
As a suggestion, make your game less obvious next time. Lola was really obssessed with "having fun!!!!!", it was kind of annoying, and the only thing that made me empathize with her was that stalking note, I felt sorry for her.
Also too much references about DDLC, try to make something a bit more original next time.