Thanks KV, for playing my game!
Yes, this is definitely more of a story than a game. I agree with all your points relating to the technical faults. The BGM couldn’t play on Mac since RPG Maker needs an M4A file to play on HTML. Because the music was custom made, the author of the music had trouble exporting to M4A since it was his first time trying to export into that format.
Concerning the “educational bits”, that was all very quick research and not thorough research, so I can’t guarantee complete factual accuracy. The choice of setting the game/story in the digestive system was made pretty much at the start; I also wanted to try making use of that tileset (04 Dungeon ; “Bio” set).
Concerning your “build-up vs payoff” comment, I was wondering, what payoff were you expecting?