Hi, thank you so much again, if you want to give us a little more detail feedback we would be very happy. If you find the english isn't right or there is a problem somewhere, feel free to tell so we can fix and learn from it!
Its just the Sentence Structure needs some work. Its still good though, and I could understand everything, just it could probably be Smoother. If you want I could try to read through the Demo again and see what may need some change-
I see, thank you so much! I will tell our translator about your feedback! If you don't have time to re-play this demo that's okay too, we will update an extend demo very soon with x2 words so if you can give us feedback about it that's will be great <3.
