Game Title/URL: My Konbini Nightshift
Pitch/Information:
A short visual novel set in a 24h opened convenience store. Slip into the role of a cashier who has to spend a nightshift by themselves. Take care of the store, manage your finances and keep your customers happy! Content warnings: crude humour, a bit of violence
I'd like feedback on:
This is my first game ever so feedback on both what was good and bad is appreciated!
these characters were charming and i found a lot of it very relatable!
when you have to click around the icebox to find the source of the smell, i wonder if it's possible to have a little more feedback over areas when you hover the mouse or to make it clear what you're looking for. i wound up blindly clicking for a while and was a little frustrated. the background image is so beautiful that nothing looked out of place, and there's no change to the image to indicate which areas have already been clicked/which areas you should focus on searching.
i liked the custom menu at the start of the game too; it was very cute and immediately felt really polished.
Thank you so much for the feedback! You don't even know just how helpful this is to me. I thought that players wouldn't click around much in the point and click sections because I had looked at the background so many times that the solution was obvious to me. I will keep this in mind for future projects and if I patch the game I will make sure to add indicators and make that section less frustrating! Thank you so much for sharing your opinion!
Awesome game! The storyline was really well done, and I love how you got to know each customer and connect with them! And the ending was amazing! I love how it connected back to the beginning of the game! The art was beautiful, and I really liked the small choices and interactions you could do - the only things I'd say is that more interaction/choices would be nice, but with the limited time it makes sense that you could only put in so many choices, and other than the grandma the other real world parts didn't seem like they had much to do with the main story - though I'm sure they would if you had more time. And the shaking animations and facial expressions were so well done! Make more please! :)
Thank you so much for the feedback! I wish I could have added more choices that actually affect the game and there were several endings planned depending on how nice you were to your customers. Unfortunately I had to scrap all of this and didn't even notice that most choices became absolutely irrelevant because of that! Aside from a few subtle changes in dialogue the choices don't really affect the game. Thank you so much for the feedback! If I patch the game I will make sure that alternate scenes or maybe even an alternate ending will be included. Thank you so much for playing!
