Y'all did a GREAT job. Seriously, woke up this morning thinking about some of the things in this one.
No worries on the grammar and such! Just here to help.
4. I appreciate that you went for the hard theme. Just think your are going to reach more players by giving that fictional distance.
6. AH! That makes sense.
7. Very cool. Don't you love it when the players just do what they are supposed to haha.
Again, very awesome job! Keep up the good work!